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Review by OhMySweetPajamas Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (1.0)
A lot of these answers didn't make any sense.

If one hundred people are lost howmany are found?
How is the answer 20? How is any of those numbers without more information?

what percentage of people are human?
How isn't the number 100%? In a factual world, where you don't count aliens, werewolves or anything else fictional, 100% of people are human.

Merriam-Webster
"human beings making up a group or assembly or linked by a common interest"
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Wow... this was really quite disgusting. You know when people try to be disgusting and it's so over done it's unreal and almost humorous. Well this wasn't the case.

I don't know how you did it but I actually recoiled from the vivid pictorial painted in my mind. And I really don't usually react this way often.

Good job, the story was disgusting but the writing was beautiful.
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Review by OhMySweetPajamas Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I actually got teary-eyed when I read this. I feel for you. Not because I'm overweight but I have other problems. Thin people can suffer just as much. But I'm sure you know that.

I think about this stuff, everybody's body image and how they find themselves wanting and I look at the movies and the advertisements and fashion channels and those girls who go prancing around infront of men and I wonder, where are their problems? Why do they get to be so perfect? Are they infact? If not, where do they get the confidence to ignore their shortcomings and act like they are?

Maybe men don't see the problems that we don't show.
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