Even though this story is written to appeal to the D/S community, perhaps it is still possible to introduce a degree of complexity to the characters. I don't know much about the D/S community, but perhaps a man who craves sexual dominance does so because of a feeling of inferiority in his everyday life. Similarly, a woman who is sexually submissive may be weary of assuming a position of authority, and craves a release. If we see their sexual roles contrasted with their day-to-day roles, it frees the characters from well-worn tropes such as women being either shrewish, calculating ice queens (the mother, Annabelle) or wilting flowers. Similarly, Ean's total command of every situation becomes uninteresting if we never see it contrasted with a moment of vulnerability or uncertainty.
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