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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thoughts about the peice:
Being a fan of Evanescence, I found this entire peice very thought invoking. Really, I never thought to disect a song like this and make it into a fanfic. Something about the idea of Armeggedeon being forced back to the cage it came from, by a queen returning to her love in the pits of hell pulls at my own thoughts and experiences. Over all, it's beautifully done with a strong point made, a conclusion and a gracefull exit. I want to try finding a song that inspires me like that now... I'm glad that I found this peice.

Technical Standpoint: There was only one typo that I caught while reading through.
"The Earth shook as if it was being split into"
You ment "in two", I believe.

Great job, keep writing.
-Mana
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