A good negative emotional feelings for a terminally ill or for declared individial are expressed by the writer. Within four stanzas not sufficient but a very good writing. Keep it up.
Ofcourse, in this earth's all the human beigns want to live for a long time doing everthing with their enormous miseries and hard struggle for hope and hope comes from or originated from love, so then two line from one of my poem named: Loving,
Love is heavenly, feelings so lovely.
It has many forms, with their different norms.
Expose of feelings differ from man to man, due to their different personality traits. There are some father like your father, they are very emotional but their exposing to show something apparently, they never like it. Your poetry expresses that, your father love you much more than you think. nice writing.
Could you please, review my writing, I will be happy if you value my request. Thank you.
I accord with you about present constant war or tension, towards, lacking of rapport, peace, with a hope to shore of peace etc. Good writing and should be more expand. But a tight and powerful writing.
Short but depth enough. Rhyming or rhythmic style of any poem or poetry by complying meaning of the item is a great skill, because a very good writer can't do it consistently. You complied everything want to mean. Ilove this short piece.
Your great achievement of this writing make successful the foloowing lines,
"Who would like to see good movies & random acts of kindness, Jesus
A resident of 8o acres of God's nature
Estes.
Being a teacher of 3000+ can not be a cruel. A small piece of poetry but extensive thoughts and says,
As a spiritual thoughts. Yes faith and trust abot pure water, I think the best practice to stronger our moral courage.
Its a philosophical poem writing. Should be more say needs to add to fulfil thiis writing. Wel done.
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