Great short story, I enjoyed it. Your writing is clear and easy to read. My only feedback is you ended pretty quickly, I wanted more also, your technology descriptions were good, would he fun to read more about "First Contact" protocols.
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also, your technology descriptions were good, would he fun to read more about "First Contact" protocols.