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I am not an expert reviewer, but I have some small amount of talent in the field of writing. I will not edit your work, but typos, grammar mistakes, etc. will be pointed out if I see them. I will give you my impression of your work, encourage you, and do my best to review the work.
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Science fiction.
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Short stories and
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Review of Because of You  
Review by jackson
Rated: E | (5.0)



         Hello Whitney,

I just read your work: Because of You. This is my impression . . . Great style, form, and a feel for putting words together in rhythm.
          I noted no errors in punctuation or grammar. The work sounded musical to the inner ears when read.

Regards,
jackson
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Review of Colorado Moon  
Review by jackson
Rated: E | (5.0)



Hello MikeDK,

Sweet! No errors noted in your presentation. I imagine riding across the plateau lands of Colorado when I read this, strumming a guitar and singing this.

Amongst the blue spruce and juniper trees I ride, dodging bullets from the sun. Waiting on the Georgia/Kentucky moon to shine on me once more, I urge the horse forward.

Great work.

Regards,
jackson
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Review of The Party  
Review by jackson
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)



         Hello Bob,

Hey, this is great, the best story I have seen in a while. No mechanical errors were noted.

         A good mystery, with suspense, a little apprehension in the mind of your audience, and then the final touch . . . a great ending.

Regards,
jackson
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Review by jackson
Rated: E | (5.0)



          These few words say so many things in less than a mouthful of speech . . . they make a person think of what might be . . . makes the heart jump . . . makes thoughts rush into one's head, makes them aware of themselves, and might make the path taken, be the right one.

Regards,
jackson
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Review by jackson
Rated: E | (5.0)


Hello,
Now that's a western, filled with love, compassion, grit, daily life and some other things a man and his family might encounter.

I enjoyed your portrayal of Harlen, just an ordinary man facing his problems in a wise manner. And his wife, Jennifer . . . supports his efforts. A great story!

Regards,
jackson
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Review by jackson
Rated: E | (5.0)


         Here we go . . . Best wishes to Writing.Com today, and in the future.

         I decided to review this after I read it. Many exciting activities you have given us on September first. Thank you so much.

          This celebration can not be improved, it does't need to be. It's great as is. Maybe next year . . . The Merit Badge Exchange Activity is my favorite part, of course, because I am taking part.

         Thank you, Writing.Com.

Regards,
jackson
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Review by jackson
Rated: E | (5.0)


Hello,

         I found this a refreshing piece of writing. No errors in puncuation, spelling or grammar revealed themselves upon the page.

          The central idea of a person learning to cooperate with nature was a good one. I enjoyed the descriptions of Ivy's feelings as they changed.

         Overall, the story is well written and consistent. Good work.

Regards,
jackson
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Review of Should I?  
Review by jackson
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)


         Hello,
Just a few words to say I read your story. It was great. The dialog almost told the whole story . . . well put together.

         I noted no errors in your presentatio of this story, either in punctuation or grammar.


Regards,
jackson
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Review of Hot Pursuit.  
Review by jackson
Rated: E | (5.0)

         Hello,

          I enjoyed reading your story. From my perspective, no tips on its improvement are necessary.

         It's funny, it's well written and presented. No mistakes in puncuation were noted. The only thing I might suggest is that you could have invited one of them home for a meal. (Just kidding . .) It's a great story.

Regards,
jackson
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Review of Suitcase  
Review by jackson
Rated: E | (5.0)


         I see no grammar or punctuation mistakes in this writing.

         Yes, the suitcase of despair, held on to with courage because of the memories stored inside, because looking at it might begin a new life with better memories.

         I like it, great work.

Regards,
jackson
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Review of Payback  
Review by jackson
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)


Hello Sumojo,

I just finished reading your story. I enjoyed it. The style, and the way the characters talked was excellent.

         My rating is based soley on the content of the story, the way it was presented and two cents of whether I liked it.

         The ending was unexpected, great job.

Regards,
jackson
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Review of RAIN  
Review by jackson
Rated: E | (5.0)


         Hello Naomi,

Indeed a very lovely song. A very sweet story, and I am sure, a happy memory for you. I like music so much, and a good voice is a sweet sound to hear.

         A good job with the English . . .

         Thank you for sharing this with us.

jackson
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Review of Second Coming  
Review by jackson
Rated: E | (4.0)



         Hello,

You have made some pretty good descriptions in this story. The book of Revelation is very interesting indeed.

         The story as a whole is well thought out and presented.

         
To help you with puncuation, I suggest: That you study articles on when, and why to use a comma. This suggestion is solely my opinion, to be used or not at your discretion. Good work.

Regards,
jackson
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Review of Petals of the Sun  
Review by jackson
Rated: E | (5.0)


          The title of this poem enticed me to read it, great title. The flow throughout the work is cohesive.

         I noted no grammar or punctuation slipups. ... musical sounding to the tuned ear indeed. Thanks for sharing
this work with us.

Regards,
jackson
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Review by jackson
Rated: E | (5.0)


Hello Kenzie,

Your see through of the hypocricy of what our elders try to present to us as justice is the opinion of many people.

Your piece is done well, with no mechanical errors to take away from its presentation. Great writing.

         Regards,
jackson
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Review by jackson
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)



         Hi NEELAM,

A religion which takes it upon itself to be the judge, when if they had ears to listen, they would know the God they claim allegiance to, rightfully has reserved judgeship for himself.

         They will be judged and executed when the time of God arrives.

Thank you, for allowing us to read this story.

Regards,
jackson
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Review by jackson
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)


          Hello,
I also have done research on my family. Here in these few words, you have recreated the story of two lovely people.

         You can be proud of yourself. We should always cherish our ancestors as we look back into their lives. Great work!

Regards,
jackson
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Review of Danny  
Review by jackson
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


Hello intuey,

It's quite a story you have here.
Poor Danny ain't got no brains, either before or after the execution.

I like how you described the room where Danny left us, and his running away from the store.

The ending was great, overall, well done.

Regards,
jackson
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Review of Reconnecting  
Review by jackson
Rated: E | (4.0)


         Hello,
First, I will say that the thoughts expressed here seem to be heartfelt. A good thing would be to call your mom, if it's your mom you are referring to in these words.

         The writing is lovely, but hey, go tell your mom how much you love her.


Best regards,
jackson
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Review of Remember Today  
Review by jackson
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)



         Hello Lizzie,

I see no sort of writing errors in this sweet, few lines. The thoughts are well-formed, telling of the pain inside. A loss so great, the world goes away. Tomorrow does come, but it's not the same as before . . .

Regards,

jackson
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Review by jackson
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)



         Hey Beholden,

There I was, just a couple of paragraphs into your story and already trying to figure out what was going on as I continued to read.

You have some excellent discriptive work here, not only of the creature, but its surroundings. Great work, with the ending! No errors of any sort noted in your story . . .

regards,
jackson
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Review of White Butte  
Review by jackson
Rated: E | (5.0)

         Hello,

A few profound words, can in a heartbeat, tell a tale such as this.

         You have succeeded . . .

         Perhaps, we will never know, or some will not care to, whether the butte sees us as we look at it . . . Great work!

regards,
jackson
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Review by jackson
Rated: E | (5.0)


         Hello,
While strolling across the Western genre, I stumbled upon this . . .

          Your words flow musically, a pity this ain't a country song. Lol.

         It would sound pretty good accompanied by an acoustic guitar and the wail of a harmonica.

         Hilarous! Great work.

regards,
jackson
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Review of Accidents Happen  
Review by jackson
Rated: ASR | (5.0)


         Hello,

          I encountered your story here on WDC, read it, and humbly offer my opinion. Maybe, the story could have used a couple of commas here and there, but it is well written and gets to the sense of the matter at hand right well.

          I liked the story, (I am partial to western stories.) You did well putting it together.

regards,
jackson
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Review of Reverend Corn  
Review by jackson
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)


         Your story is brief and to the point, seems Saul was a good, old-fashioned widow-maker. Justice, he carried in the barrel of his gun in places where there was none.

          I like to think that with the good book in one hand and his equalizer in the other, he sorted out the truth. Good story.

         regards,
         jackson
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