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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Niece piece of work. Flow and timing is good, the story is good with good rhythm. Not terribly dramatic but very interesting.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Great piece of writing! Reminds me so much of Lorne Green's New Wilderness, used to watch it when I was younger. I would have liked to see a more dramatic beginning, much like a hook before the opening credits but the seriousness of the rest is a great contrast to the satire. It kept me interested all the way through wondering about these creatures called Mall Rats...

The only error I could spot was 'The remaining makes will encircle the two combatants', figures it should have been mates unless it was just an extra word.
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