This work captures the essence of what a haiku should be; by necessity brief…with powerful impact. Writing one requires the author to condense the complex and create an emotion or image that still jumps off the page. You have succeeded in doing so. It is a beautiful pice of work that spoke to me on so many levels. Bravo!
What a wonderful use of words and imagery! It flowed well as I read it (no tripping or stumbling...which I'm known to do). A very original work...fresh and new.
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