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Review of Voice Of The Moon  Open in new Window.
Review by Norhafizah Manaf Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You described the scene so clearly, I can almost feel the sharp biting cold of the night. I can almost feel the sad melancholic mood of the girl too.
The mysterious voice that saved her however, still remains a mystery and it sparks my curiosity; I would like to know more.
On para 5, line 6, do you think the word 'my' should be changed to 'me'?
Overall, I enjoy reading this kind of writing very much - the mood, the picture it draws so clearly in my head.
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Review by Norhafizah Manaf Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Your writing showed that your interest in writing started from when you were a child. Along the way as you grew older, other things distracted you, but still one could sense your interest was always there. I find this very interesting because of the sheer honesty in which this piece is written.

I would be interested to know that over the years and with all other things happening in your life, how you managed to keep the interest in writing going; your inner motivations until you finally officially became a writer.

Finally I am a newbie myself and this is my first review. Do ignore if you feel my comments are not appropriate. Overall, I find it an interesting read especially how it all started from just a list of grocery items :).
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