Oh, I like this story. I sure want to find out what the "kind of a crime scene" statement is all about. It flows well, and there's just enough detail to allow me to fill in the details without distracting from the story...I'll just have to read more!
While I have very little experience with poetry, I'm beginning to enjoy it more and more as I learn the many forms it can take. Your explanation of the style was very useful, and I hope to read more of your work to see where poetry might take my own writing. The imagery was very clear, without needing to be as graphic as my own writing. I hope to be able to bring that kind of quality to my work as well.
How adorable. I love the way you gave the options to Behemoth as well as Alex. I really like the way you made him react to Alex's suggestion, too. Thank you for sharing this idea so well. I hope I can find a theme about something so simple and refreshing to write about.
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