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Review by Evan Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This story was interesting. It reminded me a lot of the movie 500 Days of Summer. What I mean by that is that they share a lot of elements, like the feeling of hopelessness when everything is over. The story was very well written. I don't know if I would wait ten years for someone though. Good job!

Also, there is one part at the end that spells legs as lags. Just thought you might want to know that in case no one else has told you.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great tips! They really help me out!
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