Flawless, I couldn't find any spelling errors, punctuation and grammer are also perfect. Only thing I'd do is split the groups part up into two paragraphs is it's kind of big.
Style: 5/5
The style is once again excellent. No difficult words or terms, as you'd expect when you are trying to explain something.
Usefullness: 3/5
Since this is an educational article I will also discuss its usefullness. I'd say I didn't find this very usefull myself, but I think this will be valuable information for someone who has never used google before. Though I can find it hard to believe anyone that visits writing.com has never used google.
I do miss some of the other features like gmail , google video and google earth. Maybe it was your intention to explain how to use google as a writers resource, but I don't really get that feeling because you have included features such as froogle and google images which don't have that much to do with writing.
Overall: 4.5/5
Tutorials like these can be usefull and I respect people who take their time to help others out.
Very well said, or should I say written. I like the way you use metaphores to describe the creative process. I experience it in pretty much the same way, first there is the choas of all the ideas I have. But once I start writing things down a clear path will start to form. The first chapter usually takes me a fairly long time to write, but once I know what I want this vehicle called writing greatly accelerates. But as I have experienced there will always be crossroads, where you will have to chose in which direction you want the story to go. At least you know that at the end of the road you will find a very rewarding feeling.
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