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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
I really enjoy stories that included the reader into them, like pick your destiny books.
The adventure and suspense factors were moderately high in the plot as well.
One suggestion i have how ever is the use of some more complex sentences; maybe starting out with a different word than the last one did. This makes it flow a little bit better.
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