I loved this story! The way you set the scene and built up the sense of dread, the atmosphere, and the overall dark feel to it sang to my blackened soul. The writing style was fluid and kept me engaged and while the story progressed quickly, it did not feel rushed in any way. I would love to read more, especially about the creatures, and find out more about their origins. Like are they just at this one hospital? Are they slowly taking over? What's their motive? Great read!!
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