Aye, that's grand in its own way but this bold approach... it would hardly work out so man-rewarding in
real life? Well. not fer me anyway. Howmsoever. more grist to your 'type' and do not we need to escape
to an ideal world for a moment or two anyway?
It definitely agrees with me. .. however a wee bit of 'grit' with 'beauty will record'. Maybe you are
light years ahead of me, but I would want something like.. 'that heart will hold and treasure'.
I am new here so bear with me while I adjust my wings... Awsome to me is this world of reviewing. For now, I will pick on one alone line and ask if it might be better this way
How can you be one hundred per cent positive that that was truly your original blue. I certainly
never could unless I had awarded it a very distictive string. But perhaps I may have missed something
as I often do! In any case I did find your piece enjoyable to read. Particularly so since you did not set
out to spoil the little boys pleasure with his serendipitous find. niofnas
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