Dear Nick,
It was very interesting reading about this since I am a fan of horror movies and things associated with horror and fear. I liked the story all in all. The only thing I wish you'd write is a little more about how the character felt while experiencing this. It must have been awful and terrifying. I did experience sleep paralysis last year, and it marked me for life. It's something so horrific to see and watch or feel, and not being able to control the situation. I think it describes us as humans very well because when we feel unable to control a situation, our mind totally gets twisted. And we all fear for being unable to control our lives, so sleep paralysis is something very powerful while experiencing it. You are there why you still aren't there, you get me?
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