WoW... if this is a true story, I feel for you, it is incredible and scary and you could make this into a movie...Id like to know more about becky and johnny, what they were like as friends, and why didn't you listen to your feelings about that place, every movie you watch, you always shout at the screen saying 'nooooooo don't go in there'..but they always do
I loved this poem, it is full of character and the use of comedy which is what I like poems to be, they should encapsulate the reader until the end and this certainly does that, it is short, but made me smile and think yes, I would have liked to have been the subject of this writers eye.
Never a truer word spoken or read, the colours and graphics are beautiful and very eye catching, If that was a card on the shelf in a shop, Id buy it, It has a meaning to me, that giving it to a loved one would be so heartfelt and appreciated. Keep up the artistic work, its amazing and creative, so much said in so few words
Shadowlands x
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