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Review of Briliant Friend  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (1.5)
Nice flow of thoughts. A balanced article about the pros and cons of friendship. However, need to work on Grammar and Vocabulary. I am not sure how spacing has come up in the sentences.
The title seems to suggest that this is an article about some specific friend. But actually this is about friendship.

I would say a good try. Keep writing and improving,
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Review of Jim the Swim  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.0)
Hi there!

Quite a nicely written article which describes the personality of 'Jim the Swim'. From the description, one can outline the physical and mental attributes of Jim's personality. Jim seems to be a big broad guy, determined to make his mark in the international events irrespective of the limitations of his physical (read overweight) and Learning disabilities.

This article seems neutral as it illustrates the traits of Jim as a matter of fact without stressing on the negatives or the positives. However, i would like to mention that it has scope to be more directional and creative. Keep writing and keep improving!

Thanks and Regards,
NikG
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