hey Koyel, I found this poem deep. It's a given to expect comfort an love form others specially from family members. But somtimes what you would get in return won't be anywhere near what you were expecting. That's how life works. You can never know what's on people mind and you can never be sure if anyone you have been giving your shoulder to cry on would do the same for you. It doesn't even matter if you're family these days.
You really expressed all this with not too many lines and that's really great! I really liked it!
So I say the only solution to this is not to expect anything from anyone! That way you won't get hurt and won't be surprised by anyone's doings.
What a great outlook on life. And I agree with you. Things won't always go as expected and we should never give up and always look for other options. Because we won't be able to appreciate a happy places if we don't exeprience or atleast see a sad one. And while it's not a nesessity to face a hardship, I belive if we face one we may use it as a chance to learn from it, to better ourselves in ways we never knew we could and so k . So I like what you shared with us. Great Job!
Hey, this is really amazing. This is so honest and relatable. A question that is always going to be asked. And I like the way you put it. I liked the choice of words. I actually liked every thing about it.I really enjoyed reading it to the last line. Great job!
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