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Review of A Jealous Muse  Open in new Window.
Review by E. L. Stieh Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Dear Angela,

I enjoyed reading this story very much. The pace was good, the conversation (?) between Miranda and the Muse was very believable, and the build-up to the end was good.

My only regret (I know, here it comes) was the ending was a little of a letdown. Maybe if the Muse had taken possession of Miranda? (just a suggestion).

It's tough to write a story with a word count, but use that 1000 words!!!

Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading some more of your work.

*Peace*

E. Lauren Stieh

Nightguy_1961
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Review by E. L. Stieh Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am not an expert on poetry, but I do enjoy this. It is very simplistic and has a natural flow.

Yes, even horror writers can appreciate this!! And I have my own Tibetan prayer beads that I use to meditate.

I look forward to more of your work and keep up the fine work.

*Peace*
E Lauren Stieh
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Review by E. L. Stieh Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Not bad; a nice diversion on a slow afternoon.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I am not a big fan of poetry (having it forced fed via the public school system will do that), but I really like this!!!

I am intrigued as to your motivation; not questioning it, just curious.

Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more.

ELS
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Not bad at all. Good job!!!
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Review of Writer's Block  Open in new Window.
Review by E. L. Stieh Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Great story!!! This style is what I'm trying to achieve!!!!
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