Nice poem, quite short put plain and simple, you could see where this was going anyways Good job, pls write some more i'd like to read some of your short poems or any sort of things you are interested in writing :)
From my point of you you are probably single ( Or were) and youu might be searching for "the one" but no one is the same and you have to accept that no ones perfect :) btw Great poem I hope you keep doing some more I really enjoy reading poems, Especially yours :D
Wow amazing poem, I wonder if it was from a personal life experience or it just came to you. I loved how you put your poem and how the end lines rhymed. The poem told the truth and it was awsome and I think many people here could relate to this if they actually took the time and read it. Keep the poems comming!!!!
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