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9 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I look at grammar and spelling. Punctuation errors is something that I also look at. I try my best to give my personal and professional opinions while keeping it fun at the same time.
Favorite Genres
I will review almost anything but mostly fantasy and sci-fi.
Least Favorite Genres
As I said, I will review anything.
Favorite Item Types
I love fiction and poems. I would also review short stories and chapters. I prefer to read anything that I feel is interesting so make sure title is eye-catching.
I will not review...
I won't say, "I will not" but long novels/novellas are not my favorites. I probably would do it if I believe the title is catchy and if I am interested in the story line. School assignments will not be accepted. Also, im not as much interested in documentaries but the end of it all, I would review almost anything.
Public Reviews
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Review by Neil Clair Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
I can see what you wanted to do, but there are a couple mistakes. For example, your I's aren't capitalized and there are a few grammar and dialogue errors but other than that, it is a fairly good story. I see you just started so no pressure. I am sort of new as well and I was the same. I know you'll get better over time. Enjoy!
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Review by Neil Clair Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like it. It has a sort of humor to it. Honestly my favorite part is:
Now that winter has taken on life
I look like an overgrown man in disguise

I see that you are VERY VERY new here. Just a few day old, lol. Im kinda new here as well so, as a welcoming gift, I give you a significant amount of GP (Gift Points) to get you started. If you have any questions, you can ask me or Schnujo. Have an amazing day!!

-Neil Clair


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Review by Neil Clair Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello princess, my condolences to you and your love's family. He sounds like he was very special to you. I hope that didn't pass away in suffering. He is in a better place now looking over you. It takes courage to share something so personal to the internet and I am glad you did. It helps to heal. Be strong.

Yours truly,
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Review by Neil Clair Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, I really liked your poem. It was soothing and I admired how you made it into a free-verse but yet it had sort-of a rhythm which is impressive.

The title corresponds well with the subject of the poem. I came across this by read & review and to be honest, I am intrigued.

Truly,
Lyricite
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