1. "Created from God mind " should be: Created from God's mind.
2. "And is replace with unconditional love..." should be "And is replaced with...
3. A second paragraph should be ensured here: I just want to wake up one day and see where man has lost his evil trove of drudge....
4. Finally, this your dream or hope is only possible in God's paradise or God's new world. Thanks!
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