Very well written, a bit crowed at times but I guess you couldn't help that. The content was great, the arrogrant attitude in the opening which opens up to reval one's truly humble appreciation was a great touch, I also enjoyed the journey of your growth from a reluctant student into a constantly developing scholar. Very good essay, very good.
An Extremely well written and articulated essay. From waht I can see The grammar and puncuaation were all perfect. Your ideas were expressed thourghly and clearly. You were to the point, you didn't stretch out your essay to an unneccassary length, making what you did say all the more important. Nice use of stats and logic to get your point across, you presented a beautiful argument, and since I totally agree I hope you don't mind if I bring up some of your points if this topic is ever to come up in a class.
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