I like the picture that your words paint. I thought of it as true to your words but realized it could also symbolize many other things. Nice rhyme and it flows well. Nice work.
What a wonderful way of seeing a birth. I mostly love the lines "I recognize the scent...I am being held by my mother.
Now ALL is perfect in my world!!!!!" Very touching and emotional.
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