Sometimes people can be hard on students, especially other students.
Believing in the Apolcalypse is an easy thing to do. There is always at least one other person that
agree with you. The Mayan calender had a date and some people were scared.
I believe the bible world without end Amen. I also think some teenagers
may just be swayed by some big Talking worlding ending preacher.
Pray for them and comfort them.
We are to be peace makers and children that are peaceful.
I love my twelve year old Josh. He said the Apocalypse sounded scary.
I told them they say that ever so often. The world is not going to end. so don't get
scared. I love him.
God bless all students and teenagers in school.
Cool writing and interesting to read. Glad you decided to Write it.
Interesting Poem. Good work! Write On! I liked the Part that says "You laugh you smile I got lost in yur stare" Sometimes people
we care about consume us with feelings like we are lost in their stares when we are thinking about the other person engulfed.
This person wanted to scream more than once. Such pain and anguish they must have felt. True emotions and
questionable feelings of bewilderment and uncontrolled problems. I never thought of life this way so I find this
work interesting. Good litereary work, creative and insightful, I am glad the author chose to share such vivid and meaningful
feelings. We could practically feel the same thing the author was trying to convey.
Nice cool poem. I liked it. Reminds me of the old saying "A penny saved is a penny
earned." I loved your poem. Write on! I give you gift points of 15 gift points to enjoy!!
I love that God Love it Poem. Beautiful. I love such uplifting and christian poetry. Glad
you write. I give you 15 gift points to keep always from Elisiabetta Gabriella.
Beautiful poem. I am a christian believer so this poem really touched me. Good job.
Hope you write some more great poetry. I give you 15 gift points. For a great poem.
That. is a very good little story, A nice work. Loved it. I like the creativity of exploring
the solar system and having a family to come home too. I have a little boy and I wonder
if he dreams of things sometimes with such creativity as in this piece. Great writing!
Write another work , if you like. I would like to give you a gift of 10 gift points to show
my encouragement in your great writing. from your friends, Elisiabetta Gabriella
I think this is a very well written poem. I believe God is a man. Liked the poem. I will give you a gift to encourage you today of 15 points. Have a great day and Write and write if you like.
from Elisiabetta Gabriella
I think this is a romantic colorful poem. Nice piece of literary poetry. Love your work.
Write on!1 I give you a gift of 20 gift points to encourage you to write on an get a gift for yourself!!
I think this is clever and enlightening . I am glad you write. I enjoyed reading your poll.
My step father was an American Cuban from Cuba, he had some stories to tell. I am going
to give you 10 gift points to go towards a great gift for you! Enjoy!
This is a nice enjoyable reading about an everyday way of life that I am sure all of us
have experienced from some degree before. I liked your poem. Keep on writing good poems!
i give you a gift of 10 gift points. Enjoy them!
This is a very emotional good poem, well written. I like it . About a young girl that carried
the weight of decision on her shoulder. I think she felt a lot of pressure and confusion. You have
a touching way with words. I like your poetry. Write on! and I give you 10 gift points!
I think this is possibly musical song. I write song lyrics myself too. Maybe a little too graphic . I do not like the use of bad language because it can be not so encourageing to great stuff. I will give you ten points today to keep trying and trying!
from Nanette Tron
This is a emotional poem of a little pain from loss of loved ones. I think it was courageous to put such feelings down on
the creative pen and share your emotions if it is true. I believe 7 years old is too young for a child to near a funderal or a hospital in death. They are not mature or strong enough to see such realities. My mothers parents passed away when she was young. To
this day she still talks of the pain she experienced and hardships growing up. I think this is a great little piece. I give you a thumb up. and ten points from Nanette Tron Keep up the good work.
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