I liked it alot! the part “This is hell. This is pain and this torment. We need to let him go.” put me into tears :( i was wondering if this was something you delt personally or if this if fiction. ethier way its amzaing and i wish you luck in your magazine entry!!!!
first of all, this is a good promt, but... im confused on what its it about... is about people in terror or are we suppose to be afraid while reading this story. unfortualty you should add more detail in the story to make is seem like were suppose to be terrified or whatever.
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