That was very good, and conceptually was very smooth. I dig the metaphor and agree that we are all pieces of art. Keep reaching higher with your writing! :)
That was incredible and the imagery you used was so beautiful. I could see the metaphysical objects you created combined with plain metaphor to relate to the literal was incredible and mentaly brought me to a higher place. I can tell you're extremely perceptive. This is done to perfection in my opinion. I'm always amazed when a writer can paint an entire universe cross the readers mind and this did that for me. I loved it. Keep on writing. Please, when you can, take a look at my portfolio and tell me what you think.
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