Too short, easy to read. I understand the creation of yours and I tried to find something to comment on but I could not find one. It nice and perfect too me.
It can be used in some writings for academic purposes and for fun and competition. congratulations
It looks perfect for me, I keep on reading five times and I still want to read it again but I stopped my reading so I can write my review, hopefully after finishing this review, I will keep on reading this piece of art.
Just a nice story, very inspiring for English people (British). This is a sad story. The wording are perfect and I could not find a single error within is story.
I hope this story is a true one.
It would be more interesting if the topic of the story mentioned at the end of the story like, It started with something self attracting and ending with the sadness. Like a comment but the still is amazing like true legend
This is like a lesson to us... The story left us with a messege that we have no right to desire somthing but we must leave everything to God as He is a father of Creation
After reading this wonderful article, to be honest I am very amazed and confused. I do not know what the first paragraph meant but the rest of the paragraph were clear that it about Love.
It perfect and easy to understand the concept of this article
It's a poetry! this one is sound annoying due to the word repetition in paragraph one. It sound boring make sure to use some personifications and metaphor and some other part of speech,
The message is clear due to the straight forward in the wordings
it is nice. It really give a message to the reader that the you are the person and you strong on your believe and you can stand on your feet to face all challenges you overcome
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