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Rated: E | (4.0)
The poem expresses your theme well. You can't help but feel the need to reach out and help in some way, shape, or form. My only suggestion is the line, "Now God will give me boldness" perhaps you want to make that present tense instead of future since you say Now. For instance, "Now God gives me boldness".

Continue the outward expressions of your inner thoughts!

Mzmoniluv
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