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Review of I Remember  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I like this poem, the imagery is vivid and it's quite well written. My only criticism is the overuse if the ellipsis. But overall, it's quite a lovely poem.

Patrick.
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Review of Dark Visitor  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
It doesn't feel quite right if I leave a review without a criticism, but I can't honestly think of one. I enjoyed your poem a lot, it's beautifully written and portrays the emotions of the character really well. I particularly like the last five verses as they really feel like they're telling the story. The climax, although expected, still managed to take you by surprise. I really love this poem.

Patrick
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