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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
GUT REACTION: This had me laughing out loud, and not fake laughing either. It also made me think about all the hours in the day that I could find if I stopped watching TV.

THE BEST: You have a great personal and self-effacing style of storytelling. It reminded me a little of David Sedaris.

THE WORST: Not really much to criticize here. However, you might want to read through again. There seem to be a few words missing letters that spellcheck wouldn't catch such as "the" when it should be "they".

OVERALL: Excellent piece. Very funny. Keep it up.

FactoryGirl
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