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Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow. Took my breath away.

This story brought back a lot of familiar memories and feelings. My husband is still in service and we've gone through a lot, and this story serves as a great reminder of all the love that still remains in this world us even when we feel weighed down by all the bad.

As I read it, even though you used minimal words to describe it, I could feel your pain.

It also helped to understand what you were feeling by how you focused the story on that. It's great. I think it would have taken away had you added anything more outside of that.

Although it could use a little bit of editing, the purpose you wrote this is to share a wonderful experience and you did that very nicely.

Great story, and a big thank you for sharing.
Write on and have a great day! God Bless!
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Review of Thanks Anonymous  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
How awesome! It happened to me today, too and I'm also a Newbie. :'D
I love your idea of making this note! I hope you don't mind if I borrow it (the idea).
Write on and have a great day!
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Review of Weekly Goals  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well, Newbie here and this will be my first time trying this. My goals seems small compared to the ones I've read so far, but for me they're still some that I really have to work for in order to reach them.
This week will be one for new beginnings for me because I just moved up here (Interior Alaska), and I am feeling motivated to add a writing goal into it. *phew*
1. (Begins tomorrow) Start off headstrong and remain headstrong as my husband's unit's new FRG Leader (Army mumbo-jumbo).
2. As I start my volunteer position with Go Red For Women Alaska, I want do it in a way that will impact someone's life positively and not be just another volunteer head.
3. Write the second chapter to my long forgotten story, Mystery Woman. I have all the notes in my head, I just have to hunker down and get it written.
Ay caramba!! This is going to take some serious work and dedication from a hard core introvert like myself. But I figure if I write it on here, then it's a way to hold myself accountable. Here goes!
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