Bravo! Good rhyming and flow. I definitely agree with: He tickles your ears with what you want to hear,
and then he pulls your strings like a puppeteer.
He pleads for faith and then takes your money.
Then, he acts like a clown trying to be funny.
Unfortunately most religions are very similar to this as well. Most are nothing but big business.
I enjoyed the poem overall. I liked the structure of your poem and would like to learn how to write a sonnet myself. (I am very new to writing.)
Of course that tsunami in Indonesia was certainly awful and I know many people have been upset by the tremendous loss of life there. I really do hate the thought that God is responsible for a tragic thing like that.
I know many have had similar feelings. Though a tragic event like that can be confusing, There are real answers to your questions of Why?
Yes I can feel your anger. I especially appreciate how you are angry as a Christian. Nothing irks me more than the hypocritical clergy class lording over the common folk, teaching them lies and fleecing the flock of their hard earned money, as they live in shameless luxury.
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