Nice story. Interesting and well thought-out. Also can be slightly education for some people as well. This story can also be pretty good because at the end it shows the story rapidly ending rather than a story showing all th broing things that could happen.
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/mountain_dew
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.07 seconds at 12:38pm on Dec 22, 2024 via server WEBX1.