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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I might be reading it wrong, but it almost sounds like lymeric? There are a few places where the meter sounds erratic, a few beats longer than at the same point in similar stanzas.

Quite fun. I've often enjoyed the dance of hummingbirds and their curious peeping sounds.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi! Totally new to the site (joined today) so I may make a bit of a mess of this.

I would like to submit to the current (now extended?) contest.

 Blank Page Open in new Window. (E)
Hi! I hope you will enjoy my take on a struggle I think many of you know. Thank you.
#2254129 by Morgenstern Author IconMail Icon


I think that works?

Thank you for the consideration and any feedback I might receive :)

(new to the site, but not new as a writer. I welcome all sincere critique - this is my first try with this poetry form and I'd like to get better)

Wait? why does it say I need to score the main post just to replay?!
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