This is beautiful! Genuinely made me feel happy. I like the ending, its sort of omniscient but bluntly hopeful at the same time. You certainly have talent! Keep it up!
the first two chapters have me hooked... but the second is a little short?
I love the emotion and sense of loss in both... keep it up honey, you've got talent
email me when you've written some more?
check out my portfolio- your good, i could use some of your advise
so my names not actually Raven Hunter but, for the record, i like the name, so call me what you want... i'm not a nerd but ,,,,, HALF MY LIFE IS PROBEBLY SPENT IN A BOOK.... my favorite writer is Patrik Ness - i think he kicks ass .... I'm a dreamer, most of the time my friends have no idea what i'm on about and always ask them 'what we're talking about ' halfway through a convosation .... they MOCK me - i eat A LOT of veg and i APPARENTLY need to get my ears tested... i can be really fun... and terribly boring, like everyone i guess but for me it depends who i'm with.... i'm ENGLISH and for 6 months i lived in france....
I want to be either a novalist, fashion designer, actor, costume designer (for films) and my top most hope is to be a FILM DIRECTOR....
looking forward to making new mates,
yours,,,
raven hunter :)
ps: i'm 14 GOING ON 15!!!!!
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