Nice layout! I believe your concept is very nice. I like how you used synonyms throught most of the poem. It made me feel dampened by dispair. I gives that impression of saddness, all around the poor soul of this person. I like that, and I must say nice job!
VERY nice! I must say, you seem to have your own little world all packed up inside your mind. It's like the place you speak of is actually REAL! I can see it, all these places, all these lands. I loved your story, and I love your choice of words. I can easily see you put much effort into your writing, and I would more then love to see more of your writings in the future!
Thanks,
Randy B.
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