I completely agree with this essay. Whenever I get any type of review I like to thank them for it along with a have a good day. On the other hand I have found it rare for people to say very much while writing reviews. Also, on average one out of five authors I send reviews to send a comment back. I know that a lot of people are busy, but that doesn't mean that they have an excuse not to at least say thank you. I really respect the fact that you took the time and guts to write this essay. Not many people would.
This is good, it makes you think about life in general. To me, it means that we take everything for granted, and we don't take the time to remember much of anything or the details of things. We need to remember and pay attention to more things in life, because life is short, and you never know what will be your last time doing something.
This is very good, I like how you compared things to other things. For example, on lines four and five. Also, I like the emotion you get from reading this. For me, it's the feeling of alone and sins. It also makes you think of how you never know who you should trust, and who is just telling you complete lies.
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