Okay, that's a pretty cool concept. Mixing psychological with supernatural? Instant win. Love the imagery. Little bit of the Greek Myth vibe for some reason? Maybe the vultures? Maybe the innocent girls and lustful men? Meh; anyway, great story :)
(For 'negatives' - it might have been a little 'just accept it', if that makes sense? Carly was just a little too 'sure thang, sailor' for me is all. Not a big issue with most people but I'm cruel and unforgiving creature ;p)
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