Very true ..a few words have captured the essence of life itself. The words Mortality and Soul bring in a interesting blend of opposites. Mortality being limited and the soul is something that lives on forever ?
I am an amateur at writing myself and not sure if i can review well but here goes .... I came across this short story and loved the way you described the girl. The emotions that young man goes through have also been worded well.
He is a hopeless romantic and loves her deeply but she doesn't seem to appreciate or understand that. Did i understand correctly?
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