Healing is a long journey and writing is the way to release the hurt and pain of the past. Thank you for bearing your soul to us. Keep up writing because like me it will help you demolish the demons of the past!!!
This is a true and valid feeling that many of us have in our lives. Over time we see many people come in and out of our lives like leaves in the wind. They come in bringing chaos and expect you to fix everything not noticing that you already had chaos of your own to handle. Most people see you as a disposable friend. They only call on you if they need something and never really check in on you. This poem speaks volumes and I am so proud that you shared it with us. Please keep writing! You will inspire others and reach many hearts. Have a great evening!!
I completely feel this in my soul! I love that you are able to use your emotions and paint a visual picture of the feeling of not having that sweet spot to call home now. Thank you for sharing! I appreciate you and can not wait to read more of your work!!!
I appreciate your since of beauty in this poem. The art of admiration of all things you see. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing! You have a voice that needs to be heard!
What a beautiful melody you paint in this poem. I appreciate the way you weave the story by talking about the music and the way it makes you feel as it is being played. Keep writing you have talent!
This is such a deep poem. It really touches on the darkness that depression has on you. I have been there and it is hard to combat the feeling that pulls on you. This is a very personal and relatable piece of work. Keep writing and putting those emotions out there.
This is a powerful use of of words and really tells the story of release. I can not wait to read more of your work. Keep writing and telling your story! Your voice deserves to be heard! Writing from experience and from your own past struggles not only gives us a look into an actual world but always helps you release that pain or energy that held you back.
Thank you for sharing your battle with us. This is something that I can relate to. Depression is an evil thing that really does take so much time out of our lives. It hides in the darkness and holds onto our souls. Keep writing because it will help break that hold it has on you and will also help others in the process.
I enjoyed reading your poem. It was a perfect way to express the feeling that depression and darkness leave on the body and mind. Thank you for sharing this!
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