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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I need more!!!! :). ITs a very lovely story, definitelt with a little tweaking, can be a page turner. IT unique and fresh, which I like - non of the cliche stuff.
There is a little bit of disconnect between some chapters, though that might be the intended feel. My only complaint is that it is unfinished, I finished it in one sittng and kept dredding the possibility that it was unfinished, lol.
It could use a little more discriptive.
I would love to know how radi becomes calixte. hope that is coming soon.
All in all, loved it, write on!!!!
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