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Rated: E | (4.0)
I found this story very refreshing. Some of it was hard to understand though, I think it was the spelling or messed up words. I do think this can happen in reality as it has been known to happen. The only criticism it to keep everything in the same voice. This is something a writing teacher told me. Overall great job.
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