I truly enjoyed this work. I can visualize the scene as it is unfolding!
For anyone that has been in this situation, these words will strike a chord.
Nicely done
Third line is awkward. I enjoyed the contrast between the dark and the light. This poem provides an amazing visual as one reads.
I would put a comma after met in the ninth line.
Overall, I did like you poem.
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