I liked this poll alot. It shows how many different people come from different places and that we're not all from the same place. It's interesting to know where some of the members are from!
This vignette was really intense. Everything was described excellently and in great detail. It was pretty clever to describe the killing from the murderers point of view, normally it's done from the investigators point or from the point of the victim. It was a really good twist. Please write more!
I loved this vignette! It was in extreme detail and this character was extremely real to me, especially his feelings. You explained in great detail how he felt about his cousin and I liked how everything seemed to flow.
When I first read it I was surprised to find out at the end that this was a response to a prompt! I never would have guessed.
I thought that this was phenominal. I liked the way it was written and you definitely were very realistic with the mothers anxiety. The ending was played out very well but it was kind of predictable that something would happen. Otherwise a great story and I think that others should read it!
This poem is really nice because it describes exactly how many of us feel some days. It's very sad which makes it unique. To make it a bit better you could add more to it for a personal challenge. Like raising the stakes. But overall its a great piece!
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