I feel like a child who has just been told their favorite bedtime story. Beautiful, imaginative. You should turn this into a children's book when you finish. Can't wait to read more! :)
Wow. I have tears in my eyes, every word held me captive. Amazing, loved it. I like the pace and the writing style you chose which hints at a deeper meaning to the poem. :)
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