I thought this was a great story. It grabbed my attention from the first sentence and wouldn't let go. I enjoyed the way you used some tension or conflict to keep the pace moving. I also enjoyed your use of dialogue that let each character tell the story without too much author intrusion. A great read, I wouldn't mind reading it again.
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