Now this was intense! I love rain, and this puts the reader in a certain mood. It has a very dark theme to it as well, but a powerful one that seems to permeate throughout. If I were a betting man, I'd say that the author is not a very big fan of rain.
The interaction and dialog between the characters seemed "real". Very good storytelling, too. Descriptive information of the settings were a plus. I'm not sure if it was necessary to make the entire story bold, but it did tend to stand out. Overall it was a good read.
Very intense for a very short story. I don't quite understand the reasoning behind making certain words bold, but it's not for me to judge the creativity of another. I'm sure they're bold for a good reason. The content itself is very interesting. I would like to read more!
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