I can totally relate your poem. I'm pretty sure we've all experienced some kind of betrayal at one time or another. You just have the be strong. A good poem
Poor June, I would hate to be in her shoes but I don't know if I would ride my kids bike to work in high heels...lol. A great laugh. Thanks for sharing
Your rhyming is perfect and I enjoyed your poem about the shore. I'm not the perfect poet or even a good one for that matter, so I can't really tell you anything about meter and syllables but overall, I really enjoyed it.
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